OMG!!

Today, because I am too tired, I will just write and describe positive/negative things about our first presentation. So I will list the positive things first:

- Participating/Cooperation (We were good at them.)
- Being calm (We didn't go over control!)

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- In track of the time (23 minutes!)
- Perfect numbers of chairs
- Fun (Everyone were laughing!?)
- Loud voices
- Clear instruction (They did the things we wanted perfectly without mistakes)
- No scripts

Now, I will list the things we need to improve on:

- Greeting them
- Eye contact
- Music piece

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I think I don't have anymore.

In conclusion, I think we did a great job and I know that we can improve more next time. So for example, I know that we can improve our music piece. I can just look for the timing and start it. And for greeting them, we can just greet them like 'Hello, welcome to our exhibition presentation' etc.
To me, this result is sounding like we are almost there.

What about you?